ifyouletitflowwiththesea;somedayyourwishwilletrue〃
flowalong;littleglassbottle
withamessagecontainingawishontheothersideofthehorizonthere;itquietlydisappears
youalwaysdideverythingformysakeallthatiwanted;andyet
iwasalwayssoselfishandtroublesometoyou
you;whograntsmywishesarenolongerherewillmythoughts;onthisseaarriveattheirdestination
flowalong;littlewishtearsandregretwhenirealizedmysinsitwasalwaysaftereverythingwasalreadyoverflowalong;littleglassbottlewithamessagecontainingawishontheothersideofthehorizonthere;itquietlydisappearsflowalong;littlewishtearsandregret〃ifweweretoberebo〃
羅馬音摺疊machihazurenochiisanaminatohitoritadatsumishoujokonouminimukashikaraaruhisokanaitsutae(nekaiwoikaitayouhishiwokobinniireteumininagasebaitsunohikaomoiwaminorudeshou)nagareteikugarasunokobinnegaiwokometamesse^jisuihesennokanatanishizukanikieteikukimiwaitsumowatashinotameninandemo**ekuretanoniwatashiwaitsumowagamamabakarikimiwokomarasetetanegaiwokanaetekurerukimimouinaikarakonouminiwatashinoomoitodoketemoraunonagareteikuchiisanarekaminamidatosukoshinorigurettotsuminikidukunowaitsumosubetewattaahonagareteikugarasunokobinnegaiwokometamesse^jisuihekonnokanatanishizukanikieteikunagareteikuchiisanarekaninamidatosukoshinorigurettomoshimoumarekawarerunaraba',!'
 ;。。。 ; ;
評論什麼的
其實說真的,我不喜歡特別犀利直接的指出我的錯誤,但是我還是希望在改文的時候能有比較直接的,所以評論的話只要說出我的不足就可以了,至於回訪什麼的說一下就行了。
這本書的風格是和同學打賭的,所以自己本來只是想融合很多我自己看過的所有小說的風格,再寫這個的,但是朋友死活要求我要試一試